Let me save you some time

[RiverNotch]

Why can't I just like that post?  Damn not Facebook sites.

So you can't like something without pressing a button? Your lover must be a doll!

[LunaDeLore]

"I just want my poems viewed."  ----> do you really want your poems viewed or do you want them read?

MOD: Read your welcome letter

"Worship all my poetry."  ----->  wouldn't "worship my poetry" include it "all"

MOD: Read your welcome letter

"I'll go elsewhere, you've lost me."

MOD: Thank fuck.  Now, cake and tea? ----> doesn't thank need and "s" & would you like some cake and tea?

This poem reminds me of poems I write when I'm in an especially good mood. Or at least feeling playful. However, even the most fun reads and writes require just a bit of elbow grease or a little polish. Hope you find my suggestions helpful.

Luna

[milo]

"I just want my poems viewed."  ----> do you really want your poems viewed or do you want them read?

MOD: Read your welcome letter

"Worship all my poetry."  ----->  wouldn't "worship my poetry" include it "all"

MOD: Read your welcome letter

"I'll go elsewhere, you've lost me."

MOD: Thank fuck.  Now, cake and tea? ----> doesn't thank need and "s" & would you like some cake and tea?

This poem reminds me of poems I write when I'm in an especially good mood. Or at least feeling playful. However, even the most fun reads and writes require just a bit of elbow grease or a little polish. Hope you find my suggestions helpful.

Luna

This is priceless.