A Guinea for the Grand Guignol (Ode to the Classic Horror Story)
#1
for the Weirds of Weird Fiction

A land alone, a shadow out of time,
just for us, darling; the strains of pop music,
the old cliches of roses, moons,
aligned above these old spires...
But what, in all our nightmares and dreamscapes,
revives itself, to darken, steadily,
creeping ivies, gold hinges?

And we, just after sunset, now,
pray to Hypnos, Lurking Fear,
that he may give us, 
in our time of dreaded need,
a guide to Jerusalem's Lot,
where a woman in black might find a home,
in Sandalwood, the dark chateau,
alongside Conan and Nero.

Give me your small hand, young fly,
and step inside this tent.
Let us rest ourselves among
these rustic tellers of stories...

The bold accoutrements of gore,
blood and gristle, sex, depravity -
the turn of a screw
in a weeping socket - 
"retarded" and "grotesque"...

(A peanut-smelling show with jars
of hands and scalps and eyeless babes,
given each a sagging desk.
'The richness of deformity!'
a wasting barker cries.)  

These the surface decorate
as icing on a birthday cake.

(Memento mori, sweet child.)

***

AUTHOR'S NOTE: The poem contains several references to stories by famous writers in the horror/"weird" genre. These are, in order of appearance:

The Shadow Out of Time, "Hypnos", and "The Lurking Fear" - all stories by H. P. Lovecraft
Just After Sunset, Nightmares and Dreamscapes, and 'Salem's Lot - two story collections and a novel by Stephen King
The Woman in Black and The Small Hand - novels by Susan Hill
Sandalwood, The Dark Chateau and Other Poems, and Nero and Other Poems - collections by Clark Ashton Smith
"Conan" - the Conan the Barbarian stories by Robert E. Howard
The Turn of the Screw - a novel by Henry James
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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#2
Heslopian, hello!

Your word usage in this is wonderful. Yet somehow I find myself wondering about the heart of it. I get the distinct impression something's gone over my head - that or what I'm looking for isn't there. Maybe that was in part your intent. I don't know. Some bits and pieces:

But what, in all our nightmares and dreamscapes,
revives itself, to darken, steadily,
creeping ivies, gold hinges?

Love "gold hinges" here

(A peanut-smelling show with jars
of hands and scalps and eyeless babes,
given each a sagging desk.
'The richness of deformity!'
a wasting barker cries.)

Peanut-smelling? I don't follow. Also the notion of every desk sagging seems improbable.

Your closing line is exceptional.

I'm a big fan of this. Look forward to reading more of yours,

- Matt
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#3
Hello, Matt, thank you very much for your kind and honest feedback, and I look forward to reading some of your work!Smile "Peanut-smelling" is a reference to old-timey American carnivals, where punters might eat peanuts from paper bags while wandering around the freak show. You're right about the sagging desks; I was thinking of folding-tables, the kind you see at boot sales or swap meets, but couldn't make that fit the rhythm I was going for.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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#4
(03-14-2016, 09:38 AM)Heslopian Wrote:  for the Weirds of Weird Fiction

A land alone, a shadow out of time,
just for us, darling; the strains of pop music,
the old cliches of roses, moons,
aligned above these old spires...
But what, in all our nightmares and dreamscapes,
revives itself, to darken, steadily,
creeping ivies, gold hinges?

And we, just after sunset, now,
pray to Hypnos, Lurking Fear,
that he may give us, 
in our time of dreaded need,
a guide to Jerusalem's Lot,
where a woman in black might find a home,
in Sandalwood, the dark chateau,
alongside Conan and Nero.

Give me your small hand, young fly,
and step inside this tent.
Let us rest ourselves among
these rustic tellers of stories...

The bold accoutrements of gore,
blood and gristle, sex, depravity -
the turn of a screw
in a weeping socket - 
"retarded" and "grotesque"...

(A peanut-smelling show with jars
of hands and scalps and eyeless babes,
given each a sagging desk.
'The richness of deformity!'
a wasting barker cries.)  

These the surface decorate
as icing on a birthday cake.

(Memento mori, sweet child.)

***

AUTHOR'S NOTE: The poem contains several references to stories by famous writers in the horror/"weird" genre. These are, in order of appearance:

The Shadow Out of Time, "Hypnos", and "The Lurking Fear" - all stories by H. P. Lovecraft
Just After Sunset, Nightmares and Dreamscapes, and 'Salem's Lot - two story collections and a novel by Stephen King
The Woman in Black and The Small Hand - novels by Susan Hill
Sandalwood, The Dark Chateau and Other Poems, and Nero and Other Poems - collections by Clark Ashton Smith
"Conan" - the Conan the Barbarian stories by Robert E. Howard
The Turn of the Screw - a novel by Henry James

Hes,
stunning,
pissed,
more
later
if
I
live.
Best,
tectak
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#5
Is... is that a good thing? Do I want that?

Just kidding, I await your return, mon cherWink
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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