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[Lizzie]

Hey everybody, really needed poetry feedback so here I am, the KingofHell itself, well queen, but semantics...

You're in the right place, QueenSixteen

I'm going to call you Crowley, for short

[amejadcc]

Hi everyone,

I'm amejadcc, a pen name I had since 12 years of age.
My class told me my creative non-fictions have a poetic feel when I submit them in class.
I need to go to a poetry class I know, but I love how forums work so much that is why I am here.
I'm trying to write a poem where it is necessary to remove all the excess words and conjunctions.
I hope I can progress from here on.

Thanks for having me.

[ellajam]

Hi everyone,

I'm amejadcc, a pen name I had since 12 years of age.
My class told me my creative non-fictions have a poetic feel when I submit them in class.
I need to go to a poetry class I know, but I love how forums work so much that is why I am here.
I'm trying to write a poem where it is necessary to remove all the excess words and conjunctions.
I hope I can progress from here on.

Thanks for having me.

Welcome to the Pen. All we we ask is that you be an active participant and attempt to give as much as you receive. Good job on your first crit, just remember that suggestions in critiques are not imposing your will or style on the OP, they just give an idea of your experience with the poem. If a change of word occurs to you there's no reason not to mention it, the OP has free will.

[bluegypsea]

Hi everyone!  Please call me blue.    I'm 32 and have been writing poetry for probably the last twenty years or so.  I really enjoy it and it's a nice outlet for when life gets a little rough around the edges.   Looking forward to meeting all of you!

~blue

[ellajam]

H, blue, I hope you enjoy the site.

[bluegypsea]

H, blue, I hope you enjoy the site.

Thanks ellajam!!!

[billy]

hi and welcome guys and girls. hope you all like our peanuts

[Wex]

Hi all!

New to the site, looking forward to getting to know you all !

[just mercedes]

Welcome, newbies. I hope you enjoy this place - I do!

[billy]

hi wex welcome to the site.

Hi all!

New to the site, looking forward to getting to know you all !

[Leanne]

Hi all!

New to the site, looking forward to getting to know you all !

Hi Wex, like what I've seen so far

[metalbabe72]

This is the moment where I realise that perhaps I should have thought more about my username.

Hey all

I am passionate about the written word and have been since I was 5 years old. Life got in the way for the past 15 years but this seemed like a fun way to get back into it.

[Leanne]

Hi there and welcome.

If you have name regrets (and I think we all do at some point!), just send a PM to me or one of the other admins (Billy, Todd or Ellajam) and we can change it for you.

[billy]

what she said and welcome

[sapril]

Sapril here, trying to figure out the magic in these here rules. Would love to get to the sharing part, the making friends part, the smoking weed... oh wait. that we me 20 years ago. let's just stick to making friends and making art. Hi, Hi?

[just mercedes]

Welcome to the Pen!

[confirmstatushere]

Hi

Just wanted to stop and say hello.

Thanks

[ellajam]

Welcome to the site, jump on in.

[dared]

Hi, just looking to improve my poetry, gave it a bit of a stint a year or 2 ago but I couldn't keep it up due to external pressures. Have a bit more time and I can finally be arsed to commit a lot more as well, so giving another crack at it. Hope you enjoy my presence here as much as I hope to learn from yours.

[ellajam]

welcome, dared, thanks for the crit you've given so far, I hope you enjoy the site.