02-15-2016, 12:36 PM
Writing about love
is like dreaming about sex--
better left in my head.
is like dreaming about sex--
better left in my head.
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02-15-2016, 09:18 PM
Writing about love
is like dreaming about sex -- makes you better in bed. Then again, I sleep on the floor, so I don't really know anything about beds. 
02-16-2016, 01:05 AM
Writing about sex
is like dreaming about love gets you nowhere but keeps the important stuff up front.
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02-16-2016, 01:35 AM
Personally I liked the original the best.
dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
02-16-2016, 02:57 AM
billy wrote:welcome to the site. make it your own, wear it like a well loved slipper and wear it out. ella pleads:please click forum titles for posting guidelines, important threads. New poet? Try Poetic DevicesandWard's Tips
02-18-2016, 04:03 AM
i'll go with the original
02-21-2016, 01:01 AM
i'll go with the original until i have one truly horrible wet drewait yeah i'll go with the original.
But outside of agreeing with the meaning, yeah the original is best. |
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