Senryu of my passion; boxing

[meanbubbles]

I square my the gloves,
Feel the cool embrace of sweat,
and carry on tall.

[billy]

should it read as;

I square my gloves,
Feel the cool embrace of sweat,
and carry on tall.

i like the feel of it. it works well for me.

senryu and haiku don't really need a title. the poem is supposed to contain all we need to understand the poem.

senryu or haiku is often all that's needed.

[heslopian]

Apart from the grammatical mistake which Billy pointed out, this is a lovely Senryu, which perfectly encapsulates how you feel about the sport. "The cool embrace of sweat" is an excellent phrase.

[meanbubbles]

Thank you, i made this poem after boxing and described how I felt.

[billy]

it's okay to edit a poem if you want to mb.