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[QDeathstar]

100 word poem

Address this to those who love my tale
please drop these letters in the male
I wrote this poem 100 words or less
I want to show him skills possest

30 words down and feeling gassed
It's amazing how many words have passed
I'm just glad I still have time to show
my verses skillful ebb and flow.

My art is careful and crafted
My words so ingeniously grafted
That your mind will have to doubt
Of my mind's grammatical clout.

As this piece makes pace to its end
please take a moment to defend
somewhere over the rainbow.
tis what it is.

[Achebe]

Loved -

That your mind will have to doubt
Of my mind's grammatical clout.

Good one!

[Leanne]

It rambles on, and writes does he
incomprehensibility
he passes gas from his fair ass;
he sniffs and calls it poetry

[rayheinrich]

Word-count (including title):     106

Word-count (excluding title):     103


Number of years of formal education that a person requires
in order to easily understand the text on the first reading:
11.85 (Gunning Fog Index)

[Weeded]

I like this from a rappers perspective. Bragadoccio and bravado are two essential skill sets a rapper needs (for all these haters mayn), although it is a bit strange to see it in a more archaic form of poetry, I respect your confidence in sharing. Try flowin bruh, you never kno! Oh and I like the title, reminds me of guitar hero.
mike

[Namyh]

QDeathStar - Sometimes a poet must step out of the box to see perspectives not seen before in order to write those words not written before and perhaps bring a vision not seen before. I liked it QD. Namyh