There is no experience more divine

[heslopian]

There is no experience more divine
than when the boy who bullied you
in high school many years ago
serves you chips one Friday night
whilst wearing a stupid t-shirt.

(But there is no act more pathetic
than writing about it).

[addy]

Oh that's superb.

That ending made me laugh so much

[heslopian]

Oh that's superb.

That ending made me laugh so much

Thanks addy! This poem seems quite unvarnished for me (there's not even one simile!), so I'm glad that you liked it.

[Bianca Alabaster]

oh what a great poem, just awesome! indeed perfect! funny too.

[Todd]

That would be a great moment. Wonderful poem!

Now if you could only fit in that he was incontinent...now that THAT would elevate this to a masterpiece.

Fun...fun...write. Thanks.

[cigarbabe]

How just!
I guess karma is a bitch eh?
C.B.

[heslopian]

That would be a great moment. Wonderful poem!

Now if you could only fit in that he was incontinent...now that THAT would elevate this to a masterpiece.

Fun...fun...write. Thanks.

haha If he was incontinent and messed his trousers as he was handing me the chips, I could have died happy, with no regrets, right there and then Thanks for the kind words, Todd

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How just!
I guess karma is a bitch eh?
C.B.

Indeed! Thanks for the kind words, CB

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oh what a great poem, just awesome! indeed perfect! funny too.

Thanks for the kind words, Bianca