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Everyone is watching
three rizla's
on an album sleeve.
Heated crumbs
spread like seeds.
I can smell
the crop
burning my throat.
A diver in deep seas,
leaded
at belt and boot.
A cough laughs
on its way out
and I wonder what
I'm talking about,
and why they are
laughing at me.
If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out
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Oh yes - made me recall the days of PLO hash, when everyone's clothes had little burn holes down the front ...

Ah! It's never been so good since.
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(09-21-2015, 08:51 AM)Keith Wrote: Everyone is watching
three rizzla's
on an album sleeve.
Heated crumbs
spread like seeds.
I can smell
the crop
burning my throat.
A diver in deep seas,
leaded
at belt and boot.
A cough laughs
on its way out
and I wonder what
I'm talking about,
and why they are
laughing at me.
You have, dare I say, captured the essence.
I feel like such a milo, but: The correct spelling is "rizla" or, to be even more correct, "Rizla+".
We always used Zig-Zags (though roasting in the oven and mixing into peanut butter was a fav).
a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions
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heated crumbs,...must be shite resin that's being smoked

it's rizla.

the last stanza encapsulates the laughing part. what's missing is the crisps and choccy munchin'