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Helical Orbits

Helical Orbits
milo Offline
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#1
11-28-2015, 01:32 AM
A goddess of marble
And I was her planet,
I should have adored her
But I took her for granite.
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#2
11-28-2015, 01:42 AM
Big Grin
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Tiger the Lion Offline
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#3
11-28-2015, 01:50 AM
Nicely polished!  Thumbsup
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Leanne Offline
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#4
11-28-2015, 05:28 AM
She is an icon
that nobody owns
you won't impress her
you haven't the stones
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#5
11-28-2015, 07:48 AM
Her stony indiff'rence
is only a ploy.
She'll open wide for
a diamond-clad boy.
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Achebe Offline
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#6
11-28-2015, 01:33 PM
Marble is just limestone -
so don't get all voluble.
Your metamorphic goddess
was acid rain soluble.
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#7
12-03-2015, 07:21 AM
Highly polished Milo
but left me a little cold and flat. Smile

If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out
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