< little dancer tits >

[rayheinrich]

                 
                                                nénés-à-nénés



                                        < little dancer tits >
                               
                                "no bras?"
                                i say as i pitch clothes into the washer
                                and you smile and say
                                "i never needed any"
                               
                                little dancer tits
                                their gentle slopes
                                my opened-fingered hands
                                slide down you from your neck to waist
                                your nipples as they bob between
                                my opened-fingered hands
                               
                                i press your breasts up firm against my breast
                               
                                you laugh
                                "that's such an awful line!"
                                you smile
                                you laugh again
                               
                                                  - - -

[ellajam]

I love your poem wih that pic, the eyes could be laughing or desirous or both. Much enjoyed, worth the wait.

[just mercedes]

Warm and intimate and sexy - what's not to love? The second stanza is full of texture ... and something rarer, heart-felt appreciation of the physical fact of a woman ...

[billy]

nice tits

[John]

                 
                                                nénés-à-nénés



                                        < little dancer tits >
                               
                                "no bras?"
                                i say as i pitch clothes into the washer
                                and you smile and say
                                "i never needed any"
                               
                                little dancer tits
                                their gentle slopes
                                my opened-fingered hands
                                slide down you from your neck to waist
                                your nipples as they bob between
                                my opened-fingered hands  Repeated twice
                               
                                i press your breasts up firm against my breast
                               
                                you laugh
                                "that's such an awful line!"
                                you smile
                                you laugh again
                               
                                                  - - -

Unlike the poor lass at the Lido in Paris. Every dancer about 32A, and one big lass at 44DD. Nearly knocked me out.

Lovely poem.

[rayheinrich]

I love your poem with that pic, the eyes could be laughing or desirous or both.
Much enjoyed, worth the wait.

She was trying to smile while looking up into a bright sky.
But, yes, it looked that way to me as well. Why I chose it.
I'm happy it found you at just that moment.

Warm and intimate and sexy - what's not to love? The second stanza is full of texture ...
and something rarer, heart-felt appreciation of the physical fact of a woman ...

I showed my wife your comment and I said: "See!". She said: "Well, I guess that's
why they call it writing". All I know about sarcasm, I've learned from her. She actually
liked the poem, but commented: "You never get tired of your old girlfriends, do you?"
and I said: "But I used your picture" -- My wife is the most physically factual woman in the universe.

And thank you, you've given me one of the best compliments I've ever received.

nice tits

You men are all alike.

Unlike the poor lass at the Lido in Paris. Every dancer about 32A, and one big lass
at 44DD. Nearly knocked me out.

Lovely poem.

You men are even more alike.

[Mark A Becker]

Good one Ray,

Ah yes, all men are dogs... The size of the tits has nothing to do with our fascination with them. Just like dogs and sticks... mine will try to drag half a tree out of the woods, and wind up perfectly content with a twig...

C'mon man, you know that telling your spouse "but I used your picture" will never fool those eyes. And those eyes know that you're looking at those tits. Guys are all like a bunch of babies in a titty bar, we are... mouths always watering...

One on pink areola next, please.
woof...

I love your poem with that pic, the eyes could be laughing or desirous or both.
Much enjoyed, worth the wait.

She was trying to smile while looking up into a bright sky.
But, yes, it looked that way to me as well. Why I chose it.
I'm happy it found you at just that moment.

Warm and intimate and sexy - what's not to love? The second stanza is full of texture ...
and something rarer, heart-felt appreciation of the physical fact of a woman ...

I showed my wife your comment and I said: "See!". She said: "Well, I guess that's
why they call it writing". All I know about sarcasm, I've learned from her. She actually
liked the poem, but commented: "You never get tired of your old girlfriends, do you?"
and I said: "But I used your picture" -- My wife is the most physically factual woman in the universe.

And thank you, you've given me one of the best compliments I've ever received.

nice tits

You men are all alike.

Unlike the poor lass at the Lido in Paris. Every dancer about 32A, and one big lass
at 44DD. Nearly knocked me out.

Lovely poem.

You men are even more alike.

[rayheinrich]

Good one Ray ...

    My mom breastfed me. There's never been a time I haven't loved breasts.
    When I think of breasts, the first thought that springs into my mind is "yummy".  

[Achebe]

For some of the noobs to read this beautiful, beautiful piece from the archives. My personal ray favourite.
Okay, I confess. Just wanted to bump this thread.
For some of the noobs etc.
Recursive loop

[RiverNotch]

For some of the noobs to read this beautiful, beautiful piece from the archives. My personal ray favourite.
Okay, I confess. Just wanted to bump this thread.
For some of the noobs etc.
Recursive loop

absolutely worth it

[ellajam]

Thanks, always a good day to read a Ray. I won't tell him how much we miss him until after April, don't want to be a temptation.