the moon reflects itself
on the water
and your eye eats it up
like TV
like the high polish
on the stainless images
they carefully push
through your head
but the effect
while interesting
isn't what you need
you're not sure
what you need
don't know
what they're doing
but at least
someone's
having a little fun with it
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10-02-2010, 02:09 PM
(This post was last modified: 10-29-2010, 11:34 AM by billy.)
nicely done, thanks.
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10-03-2010, 07:43 AM
(This post was last modified: 10-29-2010, 11:35 AM by billy.)
Love this take on a moonlit night, thanks for the read
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
