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12th March two thousand and fifteen

12th March two thousand and fifteen
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#1
03-13-2015, 12:11 AM
baby elephant
learning to walk -
in the flat above
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03-15-2015, 05:43 AM
HA!

i have experienced this many many times in apartment living.

on occasion, however, i was the baby elephant  Big Grin
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03-15-2015, 11:21 AM
Haha. I feel like that baby elephant on this forum sometimes. Of course everyone here wants you to walk and is really quite tolerant of the clamorous first steps.
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03-15-2015, 11:52 AM
(03-13-2015, 12:11 AM)ambrosial revelation Wrote:  baby elephant
learning to walk -
in the flat above

Better than two elephants having sex in the flat above.
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03-17-2015, 01:54 AM
Thanks to all for the comments, I really don't understand why everyone saw it as a metaphor, it is really happening.... Honest  Tongue Tongue 

"Better than two elephants having sex in the flat above."

That reminds me of a joke...

What's grey and comes in..... 

Oh dear is that the time, must dash. Tongue
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