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09-28-2010, 09:06 AM
(This post was last modified: 09-28-2010, 09:07 AM by billy.)
Smooth, it beds in on warm buttered toast
like soft cement on sun warmed bricks.
Mace laced mortar, salted and peppered.
The blunt knife dresses the breads edge
brings the mud to the very brink but no further--
Elevenses and the taste of potted beef.
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Even though , for me, some of the construction imagery was a little unappetizing LOL

.... I like this. There's something warm and cozy about it.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?