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TecTak, Tec Tak, Mercedes too,
And Billy. Oh and yes, Leeanne....
I like this PigPen place, I do!
I braved my fear of cliquish ban!
I diligently read and marked your work
In honest, careful, thoughful crit!
Refrained, I did, from causing irk
By posting some pre-polished bit.
So please unbend and share your worth
Ignored, bereft, I fear your mirth!
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 It's only been two days. I'd be impatient too but some poems take longer than others for people to form their response. I'm sure critique will come.
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(12-23-2014, 03:32 AM)Leah S. Wrote: TecTak, Tec Tak, Mercedes too,
And Billy. Oh and yes, Leeanne....
I like this PigPen place, I do!
I braved my fear of cliquish ban!
I diligently read and marked your work
In honest, careful, thoughful crit!
Refrained, I did, from causing irk
By posting some pre-polished bit.
So please unbend and share your worth
Ignored, bereft, I fear your mirth! Ah what the hell, you're doing well,
you make good crit and do your bit
to make pigpen your happy home;
so keep on crittin', strut your stuff,
I for one can't get enough.
I have to make home rhyme with poem
to finish this before new year;
forgive me but, what's wrong with Leah?
Best,
tectak
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(12-23-2014, 04:52 AM)tectak Wrote: (12-23-2014, 03:32 AM)Leah S. Wrote: TecTak, Tec Tak, Mercedes too,
And Billy. Oh and yes, Leeanne....
I like this PigPen place, I do!
I braved my fear of cliquish ban!
I diligently read and marked your work
In honest, careful, thoughful crit!
Refrained, I did, from causing irk
By posting some pre-polished bit.
So please unbend and share your worth
Ignored, bereft, I fear your mirth! Ah what the hell, you're doing well,
you make good crit and do your bit
to make pigpen your happy home;
so keep on crittin', strut your stuff,
I for one can't get enough.
I have to make home rhyme with poem
to finish this before new year;
forgive me but, what's wrong with Leah?
Best,
tectak
It's not that she's imperious
but her fine poem in Serious
has gotten its fair share of views
with neither jarring or good news.
So Tom, come on and throw a bone,
give it a go, critique her poem.
(just to make you feel better about home/poem.)
billy wrote:welcome to the site. make it your own, wear it like a well loved slipper and wear it out. ella pleads:please click forum titles for posting guidelines, important threads. New poet? Try Poetic DevicesandWard's Tips
just mercedes
Unregistered
Sorry! I will do better. Soon.
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hello,
wrong forum.
(12-23-2014, 03:32 AM)Leah S. Wrote: TecTak, Tec Tak, Mercedes too,
And Billy. Oh and yes, Leeanne....
I like this PigPen place, I do!
I braved my fear of cliquish ban!
I diligently read and marked your work
In honest, careful, thoughful crit!
Refrained, I did, from causing irk
By posting some pre-polished bit.
So please unbend and share your worth
Ignored, bereft, I fear your mirth!
I must confess, this is a good technique. Writing a poem in serious that appeals to the vanity of others in order to get some attention, no matter how absolutely awful (and it is awful) it is... fucking genius!.
Furthermore, I assume the comments under this 'poem' will be removed. I mean, to at least give the illusion of consistency 
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(12-23-2014, 09:32 AM)shemthepenman Wrote: I assume the comments under this 'poem' will be removed. I mean, to at least give the illusion of consistency
No comment excision, but a forum readjustment.
It could be worse
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This post disturbed me (doing laundry)
perplexing posters with the quandry:
can the internet be trusted?
I think the PigPen must be busted!
The newbies are in newbie corner
(one's a cutter, one's a mourner,
and one will leave the site, disgusted)
still, the PigPen must be busted!
Erthona learns a word a day,
forgetting two (old minds decay)
while proving crustier than crusted
still, the PigPen must be busted!
I 'm pretty sure we all agree
that Ellajam's consensually
the fairest mod and well adjusted
still, the PigPen must be busted!
Todd's still twerking (AJ's not)
Rowens wonders if you're hot,
Tom's still old, Leanne's still lusted
still the PigPen must be busted!
I think that North Korea hacked
our poetry (then gave it back!)
or maybe billy's server rusted
'cause something at the PigPen's busted!
'cause milo's left without a mention
no pink slip or old-age pension,
his moderator's badge undusted
something at the PigPen's busted!
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