Jim Morrison

[Brownlie]

There was a cosmic lover,
whose favorite meal was brunch,
for at that time it’s possible to eat two meals,
at once. 

They said that months before,
 he died,
He had been coughing blood.
Perhaps , before the star was ossified inside the tub,
he took a ball of needles with his brunch.

[SimikPK]

There was a cosmic lover,
whose favorite meal was brunch,
for at that time it’s possible to eat two meals,
at once. 

They said that months before,
 he died, I see what you are doing here, but it disturbs the flow for me nonetheless.
He had been coughing blood. why capital H?
Perhaps , before the star was ossified inside the tub,
he took a ball of needles with his brunch.