haiku

[Tamara]

ice floes
tonight the moon
is still

[haikutec]

Dear Tamara,

ice floes
tonight the moon
is still

We forget that the moon spins pretty fast. I like the implied notion of the moon reflecting off the ice floes that are moving but the moon doesn't appear to move.

Good economy of language that nevertheless gives us a lot of atmosphere.

warm regards,

Alan

[Tamara]

thank you Alan.

mamta