Your poem is

[Leanne]

suffusion of lavender
mist over warm water
cradle of down

[justcloudy]

Well.... that's what we shoot for anyway. ;D

[Tiger the Lion]

Beautiful. A feel of a bubble bath with candles and books. What could be better?

[billy]

it's a very very rare occasion

Your poem is:

shit stains on the toilet bowl
a turd in pocket
a hanky full of dried snot

suffusion of lavender
mist over warm water
cradle of down

[Keith]

suffusion of lavender
mist over warm water
cradle of down

a drooled over
teething ring
fresh from the fridge

[Erthona]

Directly from the brood wah!
Avon, I can hear you knocking!


Dale

[Leanne]

Thanks folks... all I really meant was "your poem puts me to sleep"

... but I like it when people get something else out of it.

[billy]

i took as

your poem puts me to sleep in the same way convicted killers are.