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Puppies

Puppies
Tiger the Lion Offline
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#1
08-25-2014, 09:58 AM
poor puppies
their first dance with snow
on full bladders
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#2
08-25-2014, 02:55 PM
(08-25-2014, 09:58 AM)Tiger the Lion Wrote:  poor puppies
their first dance with snow
on full bladders

when ya gotta go...
(nice)
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billy Offline
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#3
08-25-2014, 04:36 PM
ouch!
this has so much going for it, Frozen puppy piss, yellow stains in the snow and many other things all captured in just three lines.

(08-25-2014, 09:58 AM)Tiger the Lion Wrote:  poor puppies
their first dance with snow
on full bladders
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