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08-17-2010, 10:33 AM
(This post was last modified: 04-24-2013, 11:08 AM by billy.)
Your body doesn’t move,
though it does seem that way
if I look at the glass plain of calm shallows
shimmering after they caress your calves
and ripple shoreward;
concentric semicircles of light and life.
In The Water
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I love how serene and understated this piece is. Love it.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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thanks for the kind words addy
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beautiful poem and picture. I notice the little minnows and tha she seems to be at puberty age... LOL
typo "that"
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yes she does though painters of that era often painted adult women in such a way.
though mainly clothed

i think he was trying to capture innocence.
thanks for the kind words Bianca. most of his art depicts women who are clothed
some works by Eugene von Blaas can be found here;
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This piece is beautifully smooth, calming, I feel and deep. I like it, Billy.
I hope that this is where my comments on your poem are supposed to be?
I'm still learning my way around.
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you got it right
thanks for the kind words fico.