I've got three places to write.
#1
I've got three places to write,
but no place to write.
An emotional coward
keeps what people see
arranged, in tight-knit-nets of
half-truths, perfectly weathered
well-thought-out indecencies.

When he stops paying attention
I want the attention so I strip
for pixelated squares, for wanting
eyes 30 years older than mine.
And I blame my other for not knowing
of me, not communicating with me--
truth is I won't have him figure it out.

The problem is.
No, the problem is I can't express
my inching indifference,
nor my paralyzing fear of
falling in.
Falling out.
I'll be there in a minute.
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#2
We'll, I'm pretty tired but one of the things I've noticed is some explaining that may be unneeded. I don't think you need I want attention so I strip. I strip alone seems like it would work better. Thanks for posting.
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#3
I've got three places to write,
but no place to write.

When he stops paying attention
I want the attention so I strip

The problem is.
No, the problem is I can't express

You start each of your stanzas well, along with well-thought-out indecencies.
And whatever follows goes along with the expectation of your daughter that will be willing and ready 30 years hence.
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#4
"And whatever follows goes along with the expectation of your daughter that will be willing and ready 30 years hence. "

well that escalated quickly
I'll be there in a minute.
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