like sand
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look at this man
this man is like sand.
Funny old man rough like sand
knuckles bent busted and broken
hardened old man you're just like sand.

Oh my, look at this lady, shes like the water.
I am surprised you love this lady, sandman!
look at her beauty said the old man.
She is the mother of my universe.
Eternally present.

My wife is beautiful said the old man.
she took his hand.

the water changed the sand.
-ZM
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#2
Clever poem, welcome to the site.

Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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(06-11-2014, 03:08 AM)Erthona Wrote:  Clever poem, welcome to the site.

Dale


No complaints here, good poem.
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