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Introducing new "Farang" poem called Senor-ewe 3 lines, 7 syllables per line, 1st and 3rd line can rhyme. Oh yes, and it has to seem like it makes sense, but upon further inspection one realizes it does not.
I ate Luchetta’s taco
now I wear a serape
and call myself poor Paco
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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What a poor pitiful poem
words rubbing in the wrong way
Ideas in a cluttered home
*inspired by my own poetry*
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(03-28-2014, 08:07 AM)Erthona Wrote: Introducing new "Farang" poem called Senor-ewe 3 lines, 7 syllables per line, 1st and 3rd line can rhyme. Oh yes, and it has to seem like it makes sense, but upon further inspection one realizes it does not.
I ate Luchetta’s taco
now I wear a serape
and call myself poor Paco
This is a put on.
Hey, you pinched my Luchetta, my taco and my Paco! 
See (from your senryu thread):
Paco says sharp cheddar
is better with
Luchetta’s sweet taco
I guess it's a 'Farang'-ku 
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris
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"Hey, you pinched my Luchetta, my taco and my Paco!"
and they were good too :
Don't worry, if it gets published I'll let you have the full copyright
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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I also invented the dique, I'll send it in a message as it is somewhat long.
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
