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srijantje Offline
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#1
01-01-2010, 06:20 PM
The fridge
Full of beer
Fading away
  • the partially blind semi bald eagle
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#2
01-02-2010, 08:55 AM
(01-01-2010, 06:20 PM)srijantje Wrote:  The fridge
Full of beer
Fading away
i like it lol.
not sure if you meant it but the fading away works on more than the humorous level.

i did the (please comment) thing in the heading. hope you don't mind.
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#3
01-02-2010, 11:03 AM
thanks for the comment,forgot to put it in the header,too far gone i guess.
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#4
01-02-2010, 03:48 PM
Ahaha that's great Big Grin. Short and sweet.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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#5
01-02-2010, 04:21 PM
thanks addy
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#6
01-03-2010, 12:21 PM
Thanks for the poem
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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#7
01-03-2010, 09:52 PM
New year
Only a thought
Fading away
i hope you guys don't get sick of my musings
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#8
06-05-2010, 07:22 PM
(01-03-2010, 09:52 PM)srijantje Wrote:  New year
Only a thought
Fading away
i hope you guys don't get sick of my musings

Yep ... I definitely like your writing.
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