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An Observation By William Marsland.

An Observation By William Marsland.
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#1
07-06-2010, 11:32 AM
crabs edge across the sand
to face Atlantic waves
I wonder if they're related
to the little buggers
that occupy my underpants.
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07-06-2010, 02:26 PM
(07-06-2010, 11:32 AM)billy Wrote:  crabs edge across the sand
to face Atlantic waves
I wonder if they're related
to the little buggers
that occupy my underpants.
LOL! Big Grin Your unique combination of thoughtful and gross, as usual Smile
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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07-09-2010, 09:34 AM
i was bored so i thought i'd write about
itchy ball Tongue
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#4
10-08-2010, 10:53 AM
Good flow, with a surprise twist at the end which is both funny and repulsive haha.
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