perspective[comment please[

[srijantje]

In this vastness
A few blades of grass
How subtle

[billy]

can see more than one blade so
how about

A few blades of grass.

i really like it
love the last line.

[srijantje]

yes,better

[billy]

i'm amazed as to
how so few words can fill page
nice on SJ

[addy]

Wow, loved this one! since the picture took a second to load on my computer, I was able to read the poem first, and it was perfect. Didn't even need a pic to enhance it (I know, I know, the pic is for inspiration though)

[srijantje]

thanks Addy

[Bianca Alabaster]

beautiful pic and poem.

[srijantje]

never saw this comment,thanks Bianca

[heslopian]

I don't know if you were deliberately going for this effect, but I was amused by how big the picture was in comparison to the poem, a haiku, which rests underneath the vastness, so we scroll down until we notice those lines, very short and concise.
I have a bit of a problem with the fact that understanding the piece is slightly contingent on seeing the pic, but aside from that grump this is great. Funny, yet oddly profound, and expressed with a confidence of vision that's rare. I adore the last line.

[srijantje]

well,i move in those landscapes a lot,cannot help but get inspired by it

thanks a lot for your comment Heslopian