A world full of people
#1
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This world is full of people.
Not good people, or bad people,
Just people.
People with ideas,
People with hopes,
People with dreams.
People with jobs,
People with families,
People with lives.
This world has billions of people.
People of all colors,
People of all ages,
People of all religions.

The truth is,
All of these wondrous, incredible, amazing people,
They're all the same.
Sometimes they may look different,
Or talk different,
Or even think different,
But deep down,
Way down,
They're still people.

People with ideas,
People with hopes,
People with dreams.
People with jobs,
People with families,
People with lives.
Not good people, or bad people,
Just people.

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Quote:This world is full of people.
Not good people, or bad people,
Just people.
People with ideas,
People with hopes,
People with dreams.
People with jobs,
People with families,
People with lives.
This world has billions of people.
People of all colors,
People of all ages,
People of all religions.

The truth is,
All of these wondrous, incredible, amazing people,
They're all the same.
Yeah, they may look different,
They may talk different,
They may even think different,
But deep down,
Way, way, way down,
They're still people.

People with ideas,
People with hopes,
People with dreams.
People with jobs,
People with families,
People with lives.
Not good people, or bad people,
Just people.
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#2
On line 16, you may want to consider deleting the "Yeah" I think it takes away from the beauty of your poem.
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#3
(02-05-2014, 10:29 AM)KnightPoems Wrote:  On line 16, you may want to consider deleting the "Yeah" I think it takes away from the beauty of your poem.

Yeah, I took it out and changed it a bit. Thanks.
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#4
Great meaning to the poem, I can tell what you are trying to say. Maybe I'll give my newbie attempt at it
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