Why, Hello

[digna_sofia]

I've been told you like cheese

The dairy kind
and the other kind
- the one in romance
(Don't be crass)

You like its bite
and to bite;
the give against your teeth
the spread of salty-sour
something,
the richness
on your tongue.

You like comfort
with complexity,
the preparation
and the wait.

The possibilities.

I've been told you like cheese.

Would you care for a slice?

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Because I wanted to be silly and not really think about it.

[addy]

Fantastic poem as always. Love the first stanza! And, well, pretty much everything else

If I were forced to look for something to critique, maybe the last lines can be different. They don't have to be (because they're good) but for me because of the implied richness and "maturity" of cheese-flavored romance, the closing statement could also be "would you care to share?" or something along those lines.

Creative and fun. Awesome

[billy]

I've been told you like cheese

The dairy kind
and the other kind
- the one in romance
(Don't be crass)

You like its bite
and to bite;
the give against your teeth
the spread of salty-sour
something,
the richness
on your tongue.

You like comfort
with complexity,
the preparation
and the wait.

The possibilities.

I've been told you like cheese.

Would you care for a slice?

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Because I wanted to be silly and not really think about it.

how come i never saw this one
for me it doesn't need the last two lines.
other than that it's a rotund piece of titillating mastication.
nicely done.