Release Me
#1
~ A Good poem for this place called "The Pig Pen"

Release me
from the confines of
my Secretary life!

I want to
strip naked
and wrestle
in the mud!

The shackles
fly from
my feet
at the onset
of this begging
irrationability.

The mud wants me
and I just want to
be - raw for a bit
free in it.

Release me,
so I can throw,
throw, some mud
at passerby's
maybe one will
stop and I can
sock him
in the eye!

He can hit
me back
I wouldn't mind
just as long as
he doesn't
grab my behind.

I really,
honestly
want to
wallow like
a pig
get in that
rich, honey
chestnut,
mud and
become
a part
of it.

Release me
from the
confines of
"I'm going to
stay composed"
let me be cooky
and go off to…
"who knows?"

Release me!

©2/10/2010
Bianca Blush
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#2
i like it Bianca. it's different. Big Grin

and fun. i love the 2nd verse lmao.

and also the last. all in all
a nice easy read that made me smile

thanks bianca. Big Grin
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#3
Ooooooooooh! This is FUN!

PS: Kudos for writing "irrationabilty". It's so wonderful to utter that.
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#4
thanks, I sure enjoyed writing it and visualizing everything. Wish I had the guts to just do it one day! HA! and I had a blast putting irrationability in. Smile
Bianca Blush
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#5
Haha! Great poem! Big Grin Left me with a big smile on my face
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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