I just got a new guitar recently, so that's been consuming more of my time than poetry for the last little while. I just wrote the lyrics to this song this morning watching the first snow of the season from my window.
You have a good voice and the song fits and feels like fresh snow falling, the new guitar has a clear rich tone and the simplicity of the lyric blends nicely with the chord structure (its good to post the chords so others can play) only thought on improvement would be, to have a bridge and chord change between the two verses. Best Keith
If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out
(11-24-2013, 07:10 AM)Keith Wrote: You have a good voice and the song fits and feels like fresh snow falling, the new guitar has a clear rich tone and the simplicity of the lyric blends nicely with the chord structure (its good to post the chords so others can play) only thought on improvement would be, to have a bridge and chord change between the two verses. Best Keith
Thanks, I've added the chords; I'll try to make a bridge.
I changed the chord progression up a bit in the intro and transition between verses last night, I edited the original post with the changes. I like it a lot as the intro, but I think I might change the transition chords again soon enough.
