Don't do as I say
#1
Cut and paste this into word,
no stop, that's absurd.
Blink, each, blink, time, blink, you, blink, read, blink, a, blink, word,
no stop that, blink.
Go cross-eyed and read the right hand text only.
Again absurd but don’t let it converge
I
AMNOT
BLINDJUST
NEERSIGHTED

How many crits do you see so far ? I have two
but don’t worry if you have more than a few.

wordstheselearnwilltoyoulove
get back in order,
these words will learn to love you.
Bad wordssssssssss, stop it.

So let’s find a light bulb and stare at it,
close your eyes and look at the white bit,
as it pulses count the colours.
I get three, purple, green and oh two,
what about you ?

Have you done anything I’ve asked, no.
Then start again and complete the whole task
I’ll wait here………No = goto start else next line.

This time stare at the bulb 30 seconds longer
and cover your closed eyes with your hands.

Then follow the only liquid light,
hold it tight until its dry,
now in the memory of your eye
a planet is created.
Soon you will see a black spot moon,
each blink releases powder flash
that lights your mind in a deeper place
base jumping spiral stellar trace,
to roll round words and burn up lines
capture sobs on platelets of rhyme,
sky write its name but never the same,
never quite the same game.

Counting backwards three, two, one,
open your eyes,
journey on.

If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out
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#2
Oh. thank you so much for posting in Fun because I just want to say I love this, especially base jumping spiral stellar trace, and capture sobs on platelets of rhyme, but top to bottom so enjoyed reading this.
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#3
That was great fun. Smile Thanks for the read.
“Poetry is mother-tongue of the human race; as gardening is older than agriculture; painting than writing; song than declamation; parables,—than deductions; barter,—than trade”

― Johann Hamann
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#4
I feel like I've just been hypnotized.
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(11-15-2013, 09:52 PM)ellajam Wrote:  Oh. thank you so much for posting in Fun because I just want to say I love this, especially base jumping spiral stellar trace, and capture sobs on platelets of rhyme, but top to bottom so enjoyed reading this.
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Thank you ellajam just a bit of fun Smile

(11-15-2013, 11:50 PM)jdeirmend Wrote:  That was great fun. Smile Thanks for the read.

Thanks for commenting and taking the time to read. Keith

(11-18-2013, 01:40 AM)trueenigma Wrote:  I feel like I've just been hypnotized.

Ha Ha you have been, now every time you see a black spot moon you will think of the planet it orbits Tongue or not. Keith

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