Film Noir
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I think that I'll go with 'He' on that second 'Dutch' in the stand alone stanza, if no one else suggests an alternative, especially as the name Dutch is double entendre for trouble, therefore no need to repeat it. Much obliged Todd, your guidance is always appreciated!/Chris
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris
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