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White sheets, raining sweets, finger-holes for eyes.
Little steps, out with pets, door knocked surprise.
Rain mac's, candle wax, fright night parade.
Goblin hobb, graves to rob, costumes ready made.
Light dims, sharp-teeth grins, Pumpkin shadow stare
Darkness falls, doorbell calls, press me if you dare.
Open door, six or more, hands outstretched for treats.
Behind my back, in a sack, a home made head and sweets.
If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out
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(10-11-2013, 05:09 AM)TimeOnMyHands Wrote: White sheets, raining sweets, finger-holes for eyes.
Little steps, out with pets, door knocked surprise.
Rain mac's, candle wax, fright night parade.
Goblin hobb, graves to rob, costumes ready made.
Light dims, sharp-teeth grins, Pumpkin shadow stare
Darkness falls, doorbell calls, press me if you dare.
Open door, six or more, hands outstretched for treats.
Behind my back, in a sack, a home made head and sweets.
This makes me want to go door to door again. A little fun around the holidays never gets old. I have to get my pumpkins and candy soon!
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris
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I get a kick out of this one ints kinda.......... childrens song-ish. i bet you could teach it to kids and watch them skip down the street chanting it like gregorian monks. catchy, well metered, natural flow, well done
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(10-11-2013, 05:29 AM)RyanRader13 Wrote: I get a kick out of this one ints kinda.......... childrens song-ish. i bet you could teach it to kids and watch them skip down the street chanting it like gregorian monks. catchy, well metered, natural flow, well done
Thanks Ryan I like the idea of the chant.
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