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#1
08-28-2013, 02:59 PM
A bit of foolish fluff. Hopefully it will amuse if you've ever been there.

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And they call it
puppy love?
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#2
08-28-2013, 04:15 PM
it reminds me of the lipsmackin ad by pepsi except it's about dogs Big Grin
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#3
08-28-2013, 08:53 PM
(08-28-2013, 02:59 PM)Snags Wrote:  A bit of foolish fluff. Hopefully it will amuse if you've ever been there.

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Ankle
biter
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fighter
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bruiser
Sleep
despoiler
Life
up-setter
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shredder
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wetter
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consumer
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abuser
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confuser

And they call it
puppy love?
Love this both as a "natural" form poem and because of it's obvious veracity. There are also some pretty perspicacious points within. Probably wasted on a dog but could be easily adapted to a wayward daughter for billy. What to say? post it in Fun forum also...you'll get no crit from me. It is a wrap. Well done.
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#4
08-29-2013, 12:17 AM
Thanks both, I'll take that Wink

Happy to post it in Fun too, although I thought that might constitute an irritating spamming of the boards?
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#5
08-29-2013, 08:47 AM
I like the structure/form of this. A fun read which made me smile. Thanks Smile
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#6
09-05-2013, 06:16 AM
Oh, you've got to love a puppy and your poem, no crit from me, every line hits the spot. Best TOMH

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09-11-2013, 02:11 AM
I really, really enjoyed this! It is clever, fun and to the point.
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#8
09-13-2013, 03:17 AM
(08-28-2013, 02:59 PM)Snags Wrote:  A bit of foolish fluff. Hopefully it will amuse if you've ever been there.

BFF

Ankle
biter
Tug
fighter
Garment
render
Skin
bruiser
Sleep
despoiler
Life
up-setter
Bed
shredder
Floor
wetter
Net
consumer
Shameless
abuser
Heart
confuser

And they call it
puppy love?

My daughter bought a puppy and fell in love, then had to go away for work and as her boyfriend works nights and her walls are thin and the neighbours had already complained about the whine-ing...

I took it on for a week, hard hard hard work.

I cured it of it's separation anxiety I think. (cos I am more hard hearted than her)

anyway, this reminded me of all that

I had a good time

thanks
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09-13-2013, 11:00 AM
(08-28-2013, 02:59 PM)Snags Wrote:  A bit of foolish fluff. Hopefully it will amuse if you've ever been there.

BFF

Ankle
biter
Tug
fighter
Garment
render
Skin
bruiser
Sleep
despoiler
Life
up-setter
Bed
shredder
Floor
wetter
Net
consumer
Shameless
abuser
Heart
confuser

And they call it
puppy love?

aww this is cute! i like it.
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