Meh pt 2
#1
*Bunx's Deepest Werx*

Meh part 2
................just wow,
perhaps you have written a poem or two.
is it two too few eggs short of a full nest?

rest, if whatever is not perfect. do not put purfection
to the test.
guess,
and ask yourself
why do you
speak in riddles
anyways?

meh? why answer? banter, about this
seesh kabeesh about that
when half your stuff is sooo
confused for fickle or fat.

sitting down looking at moving texts
*4 days of doom scrolling later*
****subjective life************
always changing!
nothing you say is truly you.
nothing you do is really true.
there is no thin
the is no blue.
all cops are bastards.

do you believe what is in front of your eyes?
i don't. when we talk i never do.

meh part me
Only one thing is impossible for God: To find any sense in any copyright law on the planet.
--mark twain
Bunx
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#2
froggle! thanks alot man! i took your suggestions and edited them in. the theme of the poem is in the last line. it is subjectivity and media. I wrote it about my first time hallucinating as a result of my mental illness. All the delusions where all media/technology based. People think that electromagnetic fields may trigger genetic mental illnesses.
Only one thing is impossible for God: To find any sense in any copyright law on the planet.
--mark twain
Bunx
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#3
agreed on symmetrical. i am coming to find that i think it helps out the reader as well. i try and keep everything pretty lighthearted in my poetry. i am not really that dark of a person...perhaps Smile

oh yeh meh is like saying "whatever"
Only one thing is impossible for God: To find any sense in any copyright law on the planet.
--mark twain
Bunx
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