Her eyes, Tell lies.

[The-Dark-Seeker]

I thought it was love it when push came to shove you threw me away I'm not gonna play around I thought it was good what we found it was profound these feelings came back to my mind it was whack I never thought I'd have this feeling again and then boom you set off in my heart like a bomb people tell me stay calm she loves you she won't cheat but still that though wont skip the beat hurt so much it's a rush to just jump into this love like a beautiful all white dove soring through the air it ain't fair that I should hurt you but it hurts me to believe I can't achieve true happiness without you by my side it's like sitting on a long car ride deep inside I confide tell my self she won't burn me she can't turn me but she does.

[cidermaid]

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I really struggled to make much sense of this. I need some puctuation to show me where one thought line stops and starts.
I've done some lines breaks to indicate how i read and interpreted this but really it was just a guess.

The title is a good draw and i think you need to add some line breaks and puctuation and also check for basic errors such as the extra it in the second line.

Keep writing. AJ

I thought it was love
it when push came to shove
you threw me away I'm not gonna play around
I thought it was good what we found
it was profound.

these feelings came back to my mind
it was whack
I never thought I'd have this feeling again
and then boom you set off in my heart like a bomb
people tell me stay calm
she loves you she won't cheat
but still
that though wont skip the beat.

hurt so much
it's a rush to just jump into this love
like a beautiful all white dove soring through the air
it ain't fair that I should hurt you
but it hurts me to believe
I can't achieve true happiness without you by my side
it's like sitting on a long car ride
deep inside I confide
tell my self she won't burn me
she can't turn me
but she does.

[Snags]

I thought I would hate this when I saw the lack of formatting, but in the end found it worked. The words seemed to have a (mostly) natural rhythm, a bit like a punchy rap or spoken song.

Interestingly my mental punctuation ran slightly different to cidermaid's:

I thought it was love
when push came to shove
you threw me away

I'm not gonna play around
I thought it was good
what we found
it was profound
these feelings came back
to my mind, it was whack
I never thought I'd have
this feeling again and then
boom
you set off in my heart like a bomb

people tell me stay calm
she loves you
she won't cheat
but still that thought wont skip the beat
hurt so much it's a rush
to just jump into this love
like a beautiful all white dove
so[a]ring through the air
it ain't fair
that I should hurt you
but it hurts me to believe
I can't achieve
true happiness without
you by my side
it's like sitting
on a long car ride
deep inside I confide
tell my self she won't burn me
she can't turn me
but she does.