07-17-2013, 09:01 AM
Divorce final,
my bride since childhood;
her name was Fear.
my bride since childhood;
her name was Fear.
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Divorce
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07-17-2013, 10:23 AM
I think that a haiku needs some kind of natural word ("summer", "leaves", "frost" etc.) and focus on a single image, but this is a nice short poem. It feels dark and oppressive, and yet its message is hopeful: it's about divorcing fear. Thank you for the read
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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