The scene
#1
Around a field
There are buildings
Window-filled

Seeing the scene:
For sex
A goat is crying
Setting its two legs
On female-sealed
In the field,
A nice teenager
Beside a window
Became eager

Seeing the scene,
I got in sex-tent.

The field gave us
Mature bent.
#2
This poem gave me mature-bent. But I'm drunk. Was the teenager really nice? I mean, really?
#3
O.o this poem is about a goat sex and a tent?
weird teenagers? mature-bent, indeed

so the scene? the scene gave you this? that is the theme? i am really not sure about the context of your poem. what kind of scene are you talking about? music scene? farmers market scene? teenager 'scene'?
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Bunx
#4
(07-04-2013, 01:08 AM)Bunx Wrote:  O.o this poem is about a goat sex and a tent?
weird teenagers? mature-bent, indeed

so the scene? the scene gave you this? that is the theme? i am really not sure about the context of your poem. what kind of scene are you talking about? music scene? farmers market scene? teenager 'scene'?

sowhat

(07-04-2013, 12:54 AM)rowens Wrote:  This poem gave me mature-bent. But I'm drunk. Was the teenager really nice? I mean, really?
a really nice teenager
#5
This poem is genius
please write more poetry about goats and mature bents. Imagery isn't too shabby and it flows great, man. Not even being sarcastic here. I had me a good chuckle
#6
thanks hardon for your positive feedback. did it get you hard wood? cedar-esk?

and random the scene poet. your welcome for some sloopy seconds. they most likely could write a poem about y'all
Only one thing is impossible for God: To find any sense in any copyright law on the planet.
--mark twain
Bunx
#7
(07-06-2013, 04:25 AM)hardon Wrote:  This poem is genius
please write more poetry about goats and mature bents. Imagery isn't too shabby and it flows great, man. Not even being sarcastic here. I had me a good chuckle

Thanks.




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