Shobuj Taposh
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Around a field
There are buildings
Window-filled
Seeing the scene:
For sex
A goat is crying
Setting its two legs
On female-sealed
In the field,
A nice teenager
Beside a window
Became eager
Seeing the scene,
I got in sex-tent.
The field gave us
Mature bent.
This poem gave me mature-bent. But I'm drunk. Was the teenager really nice? I mean, really?
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O.o this poem is about a goat sex and a tent?
weird teenagers? mature-bent, indeed
so the scene? the scene gave you this? that is the theme? i am really not sure about the context of your poem. what kind of scene are you talking about? music scene? farmers market scene? teenager 'scene'?
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Bunx
Shobuj Taposh
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(07-04-2013, 01:08 AM)Bunx Wrote: O.o this poem is about a goat sex and a tent?
weird teenagers? mature-bent, indeed
so the scene? the scene gave you this? that is the theme? i am really not sure about the context of your poem. what kind of scene are you talking about? music scene? farmers market scene? teenager 'scene'?
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(07-04-2013, 12:54 AM)rowens Wrote: This poem gave me mature-bent. But I'm drunk. Was the teenager really nice? I mean, really?
a really nice teenager
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This poem is genius
please write more poetry about goats and mature bents. Imagery isn't too shabby and it flows great, man. Not even being sarcastic here. I had me a good chuckle
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thanks hardon for your positive feedback. did it get you hard wood? cedar-esk?
and random the scene poet. your welcome for some sloopy seconds. they most likely could write a poem about y'all
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Shobuj Taposh
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(07-06-2013, 04:25 AM)hardon Wrote: This poem is genius
please write more poetry about goats and mature bents. Imagery isn't too shabby and it flows great, man. Not even being sarcastic here. I had me a good chuckle
Thanks.