Starry Night

[billy]

The lady that completes me,
she hides in the corners of my dreams.
She lights the fires of my soul.
Sometimes I glimpse your face in other girls.
Are you hiding In another time,
or flying on a planet far from mine?
I'll find you some starry night looking at the same moon,
I'll touch your face and share your warm embrace.
It might be tomorrow or another life,
but I will find you–my Solemn promise to eternity.

please give feedback elsewhere or join in one of our discussions etc.

[billy]

five poems against two pieces of feedback, one of them only a short line. try and give some feedback in novice. were fine with people just posting in the for fun and miscellaneous forums. but it would be nice to see those who do post their poetry there to leave some feedback in novice etc it's just a heads up :J: