Newton's Cradle

[Keith]

I could see him coming
bringing in the action,
we were just hanging,
that's what balls do.

I didn't want to react
but as he hit the queue,
couldn't stop myself
and through the air I flew.

He watched me coming
bringing in the action,
they were just hanging,
that's what balls do.

He didn't want to react
but as I hit the queue,
he couldn't stop himself
and through the air he flew.

I could see him coming...

[Leanne]

Being a long time fan of both Newton and his swinging balls, I can't help loving this. You cleverly mimic the motion with your lines and really, everything just works perfectly. You could consider "and through the air I flew" instead of "into the air I flew" for the sake of a slight change in stresses, but it's very minor.

[Keith]

Being a long time fan of both Newton and his swinging balls, I can't help loving this. You cleverly mimic the motion with your lines and really, everything just works perfectly. You could consider "and through the air I flew" instead of "into the air I flew" for the sake of a slight change in stresses, but it's very minor.

Aye you can't beat swinging balls Thanks Leanne I'll take that. quick edit me thinks. best TOMH