Darkened Gibberish

[newsclippings]

Caramel filth jammed into
the yellow cleavage that comes with stepping--
don't wear these.
Finding this suspicious dark hallway,
you glow at the toes
(Pick them up, sit on your heels
rock forward, fired feel.)

A long corridor
of black and steel not
with. Doorway taller than walls,
thinner than Moss--
dark beads hang from a ceiling,
a cringestic opening

follow through
see workbench after work-
hench men lurking:
Steal, colored
RUBIES-EMERALDS-SAPPHIRE--
dancing, in corneas;
cornered.

Why are they splayed?
They will catch me.

Not by the guy with the puppy
he's putting her down, in a jiffy
saving it deemed a farce,
when the apartment door
closes further than intended.

Insanity,
do you follow?

[tectak]

Caramel filth jammed into
the yellow cleavage that comes with stepping--
don't wear these.
Finding this suspicious dark hallway,
you glow at the toes
(Pick them up, sit on your heels
rock forward, fired feel.)

A long corridor
of black and steel not
with. Doorway taller than walls,
thinner than Moss--
dark beads hang from a ceiling,
a majestic opening

follow through
see workbench after work-
hench men lurking:
Steal, colored
RUBIES-EMERALDS-SAPPHIRE--
dancing, in corneas;
cornered.

Why are they splayed?
They will catch me.

Not by the guy with the puppy
he's putting her down, in a jiffy
saving it deemed a farce,
when the apartment door
closes further than intended.

Insanity,
do you follow?

Hey, did I write this? it reads like the sort of stuff I stick up now and again when I have had too much of this sort of stuff"majestic" is a poor word.
Best,
tectak

[newsclippings]

Hahahahaha.

As it was, I had just woken up from a terrible dream.

You mean majestic is a poor word choice in the poem?
I can find a lot of poor choices made with what I just put out.

[tectak]

Hahahahaha.

As it was, I had just woken up from a terrible dream.

You mean majestic is a poor word choice in the poem?
I can find a lot of poor choices made with what I just put out.

Meh and yeh. Majestic is the Queen of Cringe
Best,
tectak

[newsclippings]

swapped to cringestic. this poem's my eventual shart on poetry.

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Sidenote, what's the stuff you've had too much of?

[serge gurkski]

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[Brownlie]

The whole thing feels disjointed I've produced a lot of stuff like this. I think you have a decent vocabulary which will certainly aid any future writing you may do.