What Thoughts I Had By William Marsland.
#1
Miss Swisham had fantastic tits.
They’d be thrown around the classroom
Like the twin hulls
of a catamaran.
Her milky whiteness
splashed my view
and straddled my immature loins
on many an occasion.
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#2
LOL Big Grin

Funny, graphic, I can just imagine it in a little boy's head.

For m there's something off with the last line though... like it's hanging, and not really an ending. Just a minor thought Tongue
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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#3
Mercy, what a poem!

I think you left it hanging intentionally -goes perfect with the title. good poem.
Bianca Blush
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