A pinch of innocence
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A pinch of innocence

My beloved,
don't let it pine away
your graven whiteness;
spare the bits and hoard.

If you must,
do so blindly
as it'll be too heart-aching.
Then, I'll bosom every shard.

No longer your savior,
nor your devotee,
yet with the keenest earnestness,
even you as a dotard,
before the closure,
as my utmost solicitude, a courtesy,
I will blissfully bid you your best-loved giggles of mine,
with whom I upheld my deepest essence of cinematic smorgasbord.

Without notice of departure,
I shall go, leaving only a pinch of innocence.
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HI.. I loved the message of this poem. I also liked the off-rhymes. I wonder about keenest earnestness though. That doesn't seem so good. Thanks.

-H
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