05-10-2013, 10:34 AM
![[Image: rainbow.JPG]](https://lh3.googleusercontent.com/-4jro5l0Zy4E/UYxM-0bF0iI/AAAAAAAAAQM/4gc0AW3TOlg/w857-h607-no/rainbow.JPG)
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Rainbow
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05-14-2013, 03:30 AM
I think it's a very pretty image. Text and picture combines well, I'm just not sure about "coloured". IMHO, it makes the line sound a bit cluttered. But still, a good image
 -LB
05-14-2013, 11:13 AM
I agree with Volaticus, coloured sounds like it doesn't fit into the piece. Maybe change it to 'vivid'? It will still fit with the 7 syllables
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