06-08-2021, 06:18 PM
Thanks for the feedback!
CRNDLSM, ‘freely gathered’ is referring to social distancing measures in place during lockdown (uk at least),
I really like your point about the weeds and conforming, I suppose its all a matter of perspective and who ultimately decides where they can grow.
KNOT, that’s a valid point, previous version got lost along the way and ultimately I decided to attempt again with more specific draft.
I’m not convinced this is the answer but I’m happy to leave it alone for time being.
It’s an attempt to capture aspects of uk lockdown and it’s effects. I was particularly aware of the number of people buying dogs/adopting rescues and the huge increase in people building garden pubs/summerhouses. I attempted to work these factors into poem.
Once more many thanks for taking time to read and comment; it’s much appreciated!
Newbie
CRNDLSM, ‘freely gathered’ is referring to social distancing measures in place during lockdown (uk at least),
I really like your point about the weeds and conforming, I suppose its all a matter of perspective and who ultimately decides where they can grow.
KNOT, that’s a valid point, previous version got lost along the way and ultimately I decided to attempt again with more specific draft.
I’m not convinced this is the answer but I’m happy to leave it alone for time being.
It’s an attempt to capture aspects of uk lockdown and it’s effects. I was particularly aware of the number of people buying dogs/adopting rescues and the huge increase in people building garden pubs/summerhouses. I attempted to work these factors into poem.
Once more many thanks for taking time to read and comment; it’s much appreciated!
Newbie