02-05-2016, 03:07 PM
(02-05-2016, 08:25 AM)nikkisto Wrote:(02-05-2016, 02:31 AM)ellajam Wrote: Hi, nikkisto, welcome to the Pen. Thank you for the critiques you've given already, they are just fine. All we ask is for a specific, honest account of your read, you'll receive the same.Pancakes in the Stream--fantastic title. Thank you for the welcome and reassurance! I'll definitely be taking a look at the Poetry Practice link, and thinking extensively of rhymes for purple...
The forms in Poetry Practice are fun to learn and you'll get plenty of help there. And the site can always use a little more purple and pancakes, looking forward to it. We have a pancake poem or two around here, I'm off to look for them.
Hope you enjoy the site.
Here's one.
Pancakes in the Stream
Blueberry pancakes
(they cook up purple)
go really well
with maple syruple.
Read your critiques. Quite articulate.
Welcome,
Ray
i used to know a lotta stuff, but i still have eight cats