10-07-2020, 05:44 PM
No joke, the first two stanzas read as if they’re about static electricity between two balloons with faces drawn on them.
That’s a killer idea for a poem, but if it’s not what you’re wanting . . . Revise.
If you want me to specify what images and narratives lead me to that conclusion, just lmk
That’s a killer idea for a poem, but if it’s not what you’re wanting . . . Revise.
If you want me to specify what images and narratives lead me to that conclusion, just lmk
A yak is normal.