The voices on the moon.
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(10-28-2010, 10:54 AM)billy Wrote:  needs a little work on the grammar and syntax but it's a pleasant read.
that keeps the reader going.

thanks lizzy.
You're welcome!
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The voices on the moon. - by lizzyrose12 - 10-28-2010, 08:07 AM
RE: The voices on the moon. - by billy - 10-28-2010, 10:54 AM
RE: The voices on the moon. - by lizzyrose12 - 10-30-2010, 12:41 AM



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