07-24-2012, 01:08 AM
I really liked this, and I can't honestly find anything to criticize, but as I read it I thought I'd leave a comment anyway.
The only thing that puzzles me is the "we" o: We are who? There is a he and a she but she can't be part of the we, at least I don't think.
The only thing that puzzles me is the "we" o: We are who? There is a he and a she but she can't be part of the we, at least I don't think.

