07-23-2012, 02:37 PM
I am not keen on "rascally". It made me think of Bugs Bunny. I do like your weaving in of the Wizard of Oz, however.
Final strophe is scathingly human. I especially appreciate it, and the closing thought. I have said it before, but many of your pieces come through as loud little studies on the human psyche,and you execute them brilliantly.
Final strophe is scathingly human. I especially appreciate it, and the closing thought. I have said it before, but many of your pieces come through as loud little studies on the human psyche,and you execute them brilliantly.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?