07-23-2012, 10:43 AM
I'm sure I've read this before -- was it in the Pig's Arse?
Last line might be better with "that hadn't been sewn". Otherwise, I like the rhythm and the casual rhymes but I'm damaged forever by the image of you lying among shit with your cock out.
Last line might be better with "that hadn't been sewn". Otherwise, I like the rhythm and the casual rhymes but I'm damaged forever by the image of you lying among shit with your cock out.
It could be worse